We see hundreds of early stage pitches every year. While some are good, many could be improved with better structure and content. Series A pitches have a different emphasis than pitches for later rounds. In early rounds, you need to convince investors that there is an attractive market opportunity when there is often very little real world validation around your business. You also need to convince investors that the team can execute in what is often the most difficult (or rephrased risky) time of trying to build a company.
If you search the web, you will find lots of resources on what to include in a pitch – however, here are some of the basics (these need to be adjusted as appropriate for your type of business and industry):
Market: the market should be described in such a way that it makes it interesting for the group of investors you are targeting. Sometimes it’s about bringing a disruptive innovation to a large established market (think Dell in PCs) or an emergent market that’s showing explosive growth (think YouTube in online video). All investors focus on the size of the market – basically the bigger the ultimate market, the more attractive it will be, but that does not mean you should throw out wild estimates (that has the affect of questioning your credibility which will hurt you more with investors than any small market size estimates)
Team: (a major focus for investors) — do they have right skills, experience and credibility?
Product: the product/solution should flow naturally from your analysis on the market i.e. it meets a critical need in the market; customers will want to buy (as opposed to you needing to convince them that they need this); and for business customers, the economic value is real and quantifiable.
Customers and market entry: as a Series A round its unlikely that you have many customers (if any). This is a very tough place for new startups and one of the major areas of risk for investors. You need to show investors you understand cold who your initial target customers are, their buying process, and how they will likely use the product (note: consumer Web 2.0 applications are different — its about the user experience rather than ROI). If you don’t know these or at least have some well grounded, working assumptions around them, then its like sailing in a fog. Based on these assumptions flow your target customers, channels, sales models, and product roadmap. The product direction and market focus is likely to change (almost always does) as the company grows and the market shakes out, but you need a starting point in which to rally the team and allocate your scarce resources.
Revenue model: product or service? price points? who pays? revenue sharing?
Competition: present and future, substitutes?
Financials and milestones: how much, how big, and how quickly are all questions that investors will ask around your financials. In addition, what milestones will you achieve with the money you want to raise? Now that you have the key points, organize them in a way that logically tells the story. Start with a summary slide. Your audience’s attention is at its highest level at the start, so look for an opening that hooks them in to the story you are about to tell! Avoid clichés and buzzwords.
To help get you started, click here for a sample template.
Good luck!
August 30, 2007 at 10:30 pm |
I’d like to access the link for “click here for a sample template.” There seems to be no link. Please advise.
Thank you.
August 30, 2007 at 11:47 pm |
Sorry, WordPress was fitful today. I thought I had fixed the link and believe it’s fixed now. If not, the link is: http://www.commonangels.com/files/Fund_raising_template.ppt
August 31, 2007 at 4:57 am |
Now that I have looked at your slides. You should refrain from giving anyone advice. What a fairy story…… Compared to your slides, Harry Potter is filed in non-fiction.
BTW. we have met, and if you reply Ill call you.
August 31, 2007 at 3:16 pm |
Great job. I also look ad hundreds of these presentations a year. Only 5% tell me what I need to know before I begin DD. Your slides do it.
September 5, 2007 at 6:29 pm |
I too looked at your slides. They did not help me at all. I have a business start-up concept. I need someone to actually discuss it with, to actually say, this is what you need to do step-by-step and to finance the enterprise until it supports itself and then repays the investor. It is also imperative that I have someone that knows how, and can step in to help, maneuver through the local codes and government bureaucracy’s. I am not afraid of the work.
October 13, 2007 at 6:56 am |
don’t you think providing financial projections is a waste of time for a start up? Have you ever seen a start up projections that come close to the said projections 3 years out? Too many things change for start ups and most numbers are pulled out of thin air. I looked at your template and I think it can be simplified.
20 min: (less chance VC falls to sleep)
-mission/summary
-founder/team
-problem
-solution
-value proposition
-revenue model
-market strategy
-competition
-market opportunity
-the ask
October 13, 2007 at 10:03 am |
Andrew,
I’ve found both as someone making the initial investment (about 1/2 of how I spend my time) and then as someone helping companies raise money from other people (the other 1/2 of my time) that the financial projections are important for several reasons: 1) they give a sense of how big the opportunity can get; and 2) how much capital it will take to achieve the goal. There are very different investment strategies and very different investors if the company needs $2-3 million to get to grow to be a $20-30 million company and one that needs $20-30 million to be a $100 million company.
I agree with your statement that everyone knows they are merely estimates. But when I’ve been helping a company pitch to others without financials, we’ve always been asked “how big does this get” and “how much cash does it take to get there”?
October 15, 2007 at 12:11 am |
Thanks for the response. I was thinking about the web 2.0 seed stage ($250-$500K,) that will give a start up the resources to be able to build a great service and to get them to the A round to continue to develop the service.
October 17, 2007 at 2:35 am |
When one submits a business pitch, should it be a quick, to-the-point 1-2 page high-level overview or the detailed pitch that is presented here?
I was told that if the 1-2 page high-level overview of the business concept sells, the VC firm or Angel would request for a more detailed business plan. Is that true?
Thank You
October 18, 2007 at 8:11 pm |
J,
Its typical that a VC or angel group will do a ‘quick review” of the opportunity by looking at a 1 – 2 page executive summary. The quick review covers the points I raised in the post — who is the team, what’s the innovation/technology/product, what is the market opportunity, and what are the capital needs? If there is a fit with the investment strategy and it sounds interesting, then its typical to ask for an investor pitch (not the bus plan) and meet with the entrepreneur.
Chris
December 14, 2008 at 11:04 pm |
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